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Nice effects

Nice effects but as the saying goes, "the younger generation have shorter attention span". Therefore, maybe you need more variety to how this sounds as a song. Towards the end of the song, there was a long transition where i heard "he hangs out in bars, he's got a few scars" being repeated.....maybe too many times.

SHADOWFOX2 responds:

I coulda sworn I said it was unfinished somewhere in the author comments......
However, this version was used and I kept gettin' pestered to submit it before it blew over.
I agree, everything is too repetitive, however there are tons of songs out there who are even more simplistic and repetitive than this one.
Thank you for your criticism :]

I think

I think that you can add more feelings to your trance by adding more variety to how this track sounds. This track, currently, kind of create "the feeling you get when you look back at yourself in the past and see the efforts you did for something". It creates a nostalgic feeling. However, it just remain at that and it did not provoke any other emotions or memory. Other than that, I like the transitions in this track.

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