Nice effects
Nice effects but as the saying goes, "the younger generation have shorter attention span". Therefore, maybe you need more variety to how this sounds as a song. Towards the end of the song, there was a long transition where i heard "he hangs out in bars, he's got a few scars" being repeated.....maybe too many times.
I coulda sworn I said it was unfinished somewhere in the author comments......
However, this version was used and I kept gettin' pestered to submit it before it blew over.
I agree, everything is too repetitive, however there are tons of songs out there who are even more simplistic and repetitive than this one.
Thank you for your criticism :]
Nice but cant catch the words
I like how you did the track and all. But the effect from the song would be greater if I can catch the words. Really, I like this.
Here's the lyrics.
They called him brilliant, the best of the best, stay fixed on positions and forget the rest
Discovered cohesion, perceived the absurd
I didn't even hear one word
Tossing and turning, long time before I truly woke up, questioned my mind
Sinking feeling about you I just cant get rid of
Come near me, all
On the mountain top
Come near me all
They called him stupid, the worst of the worst
He kept going in circles, never returned
Destroyed several nations, perceived he was God
No one saw through his fucking facade
Tossing and burning through space
a little blue planet sent to waste
Come near me all
I know what you want
You are the one inside of us
To the highest cloud
Come near me
You are the one inside
To the highest cloud
Come near me all
You are the one inside
To the highest cloud
Sinking feeling about you I can't get rid of
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