Nice effects
Nice effects but as the saying goes, "the younger generation have shorter attention span". Therefore, maybe you need more variety to how this sounds as a song. Towards the end of the song, there was a long transition where i heard "he hangs out in bars, he's got a few scars" being repeated.....maybe too many times.
I coulda sworn I said it was unfinished somewhere in the author comments......
However, this version was used and I kept gettin' pestered to submit it before it blew over.
I agree, everything is too repetitive, however there are tons of songs out there who are even more simplistic and repetitive than this one.
Thank you for your criticism :]
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Monday Night Synergy (Wolfnam)